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I think there are 2 reasons why people do some strange gestures when they feel extreme emotions. First, they do the strange gestures naturally. For me, i do the gestures naturally when i feel extreme emotions such as clappping my hands, shaking my each hand with tapping my foot on the floor. I don't know why i do those gestures. Haha.
Second, they do it because they've seen people who did that gestures. It means they mimic them. Actually it's not like mimic but they saw that gestures a lot and the gestures become to their own gestures. Does it make sense?
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Hello there [이름]!!!
A great Tuesday morning~~
This one\'s great! :) I was smiling while reading it coz I was trying to imagine how you\'re
gonna say this to me while on the phone..kkk
Anyway, please check some of the corrections I\'ve done here.
Have a nice day!
T.Kristel
I think there are 2 reasons why people do some strange gestures when they feel extreme emotions.
>> CORRECT!!
First, they do the strange gestures naturally.
>> CORRECT!!
For me, i do the gestures naturally when i feel extreme emotions such as clappping my hands, shaking my each hand with tapping my foot on the floor.
>> For me, i do gestures naturally such as clappping my hands, shaking each of my hands while tapping my foot on the floor when i feel extreme emotions.
I don\'t know why i do those gestures. Haha.
>> CORRECT!! Second, they do it because they\'ve seen people who did that gestures.
>> Second, they do it because they\'ve seen people who did those gestures.
It means they mimic them.
>> CORRECT!!
Actually it\'s not like mimic but they saw that gestures a lot and the gestures become to their own gestures.
>> Actually it\'s not like mimicking but the\'ve those gestures a lot so they eventually adapt them.
Does it make sense?
>> CORRECT!!
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