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2013-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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Good morning! Nice to meet you again. Your name is the same who one of my closet friend. Yesterday, I forget your call so I didn't prepared the book. I don't forget to take the book. well, I didn't sleep very well last night. I think the weather is changing now so It's cold in the morning and night. What about you? Is it cool wether? Anyway I have a memory one friend who she belive me everything. When I was in high school I became a class president. At that time my friend support my oppinion. I am apreciate her. That's all Have a nice day!! See you tonight!

강사 첨삭

Good morning! How are you today?

It\'s nice to meet you too.^^

I actually had a great time with you.  

I\'m glad I have the same name with your friend so you will always remember me.

Here are some of my corrections. I hope you\'ll have the time to go over it.

Hoping to have an enjoyable class with you!

See you!^^

~Teacher Angel~

Good morning!

>> Correct!
Nice to meet you again.

>> Correct!
Your name is the same who one of my closet friend.

>> Your name is the same with one of my closest friends.

OR >> You have the same name with one of my closest friends.
Yesterday, I forget your call so I didn\'t prepared the book.

>> Yesterday, I forgot that you would call so I didn\'t prepare my book.
I don\'t forget to take the book.
>> I won\'t forget to take the book.

well, I didn\'t sleep very well last night.

>> Well, I didn\'t sleep very well last night.
I think the weather is changing now so It\'s cold in the morning and night.

>> I think the weather is changing now so it\'s cold in the morning and night.
What about you?

>> Correct!

 Is it cool wether?
>> Is your weather cool? 

Anyway I have a memory one friend who she belive me everything.

>> Anyway, I remember a friend who believes in me.
When I was in high school I became a class president.

>> Correct!

OR >> When I was in high school, I was the class president. 
At that time my friend support my oppinion.

>> At that time, my friend supports my opinions.
I am apreciate her.

>> I appreciate her.

That\'s all
>> Correct!

Have a nice day!!

>> Correct!

See you tonight!

> Correct!

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