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2013-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi! Angle Long time no see. How was your holiday? I stayed at home and took a rest. But Last night I watched musical "American idiot" with my coworker. It was very famous and expansive. But it only was English somepart I felt bored. I tried to look funny but actually not. English is very difficult for me and I want to eager to improve English ability. Sometime I felt angry at me I have studied for 7 years but my ability is not good. Um... I am so depressed when i can speak English fluently? Thank you for listen my word. Have a nice day and see you tonight!

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for trusting me in sharing your predicaments when it comes to learning English.

Don\'t worry, because everything is a process. You don\'t learn everything in one night. Just be patient and you\'ll meet your target.

Have a great day! See you!

~ Teacher Angel

Hi! Angle

>> Hi Angel!

Long time no see.

>> Correct.

How was your holiday?

>> Correct.

I stayed at home and took a rest.

>> Correct.

But Last night I watched musical \"American idiot\" with my coworker.

>>  But Last night I watched the musical \"American idiot\" with my coworker.

It was very famous and expansive.

>>  It was very famous and expensive.

But it only was English somepart I felt bored.

>> But it was the English part that I felt bored.

I tried to look funny but actually not.

>>  I tried to look funny but I was not.

>> OR: I tried to look funny but I couldn\'t.

English is very difficult for me and I want to eager to improve English ability.

>>  English is very difficult for me and I want to eagerly improve my English ability.

Sometime I felt angry at me I have studied for 7 years but my ability is not good.

>> Sometimes I feel angry at me because I have studied for 7 years but my ability is not good.

Um... I am so depressed when i can speak English fluently?

>>  Um... I am so depress when I can speak English fluently?

Thank you for listen my word.

>>  Thank you for listening.

Have a nice day and see you tonight!

>> Correct.

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