Hello
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강사 첨삭
Hello there,
I know that you do have the potentials in improving your skills in English. Have confidence in expressing your thoughts for practice makes perfect.
Have a great day ahead!!!!^^
T. Lexi^^
Good morning!
>>correct
Today is the frist day of the week.
>>It is the first day of the week, today.
>>Today is the first day of the week.
I am going to study hart so I will be at home out class time.
>>I am going to study hard, so I will at home during class time.
Nowadays, I was very busy such as met friends, had a date...
>>Nowadays, I am very busy meeting my friends and having/going on dates.
I want to play more not study.
>>I want to play more than to study.
But yesterday I think about my future so I decided to study more and I will teach basic grammar to lower level person.
>>I thought about my future yesterday, I decided to study more then I will teach basic grammar to low-leveled students.
I am looking for someone maybe my frist student will be my younger sister.
>>I am looking for a student, maybe, my younger sister will be my first student.
And talk more agin!
>>Talk to you in class!^^
Have a nice day!!
>>correct^^
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