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2013-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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Good morning! Today is the frist day of the week. I am going to study hart so I will be at home out class time. Nowadays, I was very busy such as met friends, had a date... I want to play more not study. But yesterday I think about my future so I decided to study more and I will teach basic grammar to lower level person. I am looking for someone maybe my frist student will be my younger sister. And talk more agin! Have a nice day!!

강사 첨삭

Hello there,

I know that you do have the potentials in improving your skills in English. Have confidence in expressing your thoughts for practice makes perfect. 

Have a great day ahead!!!!^^

T. Lexi^^

Good morning!

>>correct

Today is the frist day of the week.

>>It is the first day of the week, today.

>>Today is the first day of the week.

I am going to study hart so I will be at home out class time.

>>I am going to study hard, so I will at home during class time.

Nowadays, I was very busy such as met friends, had a date...

>>Nowadays, I am very busy meeting my friends and having/going on dates.

I want to play more not study.

>>I want to play more than to study.

But yesterday I think about my future so I decided to study more and I will teach basic grammar to lower level person.

>>I thought about my future yesterday, I decided to study more then I will teach basic grammar to low-leveled students. 

I am looking for someone maybe my frist student will be my younger sister.

>>I am looking for a student, maybe, my younger sister will be my first student.

And talk more agin!

>>Talk to you in class!^^

Have a nice day!!

>>correct^^

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