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2013-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Aimee

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Good afternoon!! I am sorry that my absent last time. At that time I am waiting for you but I took a sleep when I wake up the time was in 5minutes. I had a bed condition so I have took a rest at home. I had clean the house studied and read novel such like that. Now I am not regulary job so I want to move regulary job. But I decided to change job when I prepare to get a 900 grade at Toeic. So I am not complaint anymore! Have a nice day and see you tonight!

강사 첨삭

Hi there^^

Thank you for taking time and sending me this composition^^

And also, thank you for reasoning out the absence that you had last time^^

Anyway, it\'s okay, don\'t worry about that^^

I made some corrections^^

See you^^

~T.Lexi^^

Good afternoon!!

>>CORRECT!

I am sorry that my absent last time.

>>I am sorry about my absence last time.^^

At that time I am waiting for you but I took a sleep when I wake up the time was in 5minutes.

>>At that time, I was waiting for you but I took a nap and when I woke up it\'s already past 5 minutes of our class.^^

I had a bed condition so I have took a rest at home.

>>Do you mean \" I\'m in a bad condition, so I took a rest at home.\"

I had clean the house studied and read novel such like that.

>>I had to clean the house, study, read a novel and etc.

Now I am not regulary job so I want to move regulary job.

>>Now, I don\'t have a regular job, so I want to have a regular job.

But I decided to change job when I prepare to get a 900 grade at Toeic.

>>But I decided to change my job once I get a 900 score in the TOEIC.

So I am not complaint anymore!
>> So I am not complaining anymore.

Have a nice day and see you tonight!

>>CORRECT!^^

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