Hello
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강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for taking time and sending me this composition^^
And also, thank you for reasoning out the absence that you had last time^^
Anyway, it\'s okay, don\'t worry about that^^
I made some corrections^^
See you^^
~T.Lexi^^
Good afternoon!!
>>CORRECT!
I am sorry that my absent last time.
>>I am sorry about my absence last time.^^
At that time I am waiting for you but I took a sleep when I wake up the time was in 5minutes.
>>At that time, I was waiting for you but I took a nap and when I woke up it\'s already past 5 minutes of our class.^^
I had a bed condition so I have took a rest at home.
>>Do you mean \" I\'m in a bad condition, so I took a rest at home.\"
I had clean the house studied and read novel such like that.
>>I had to clean the house, study, read a novel and etc.
Now I am not regulary job so I want to move regulary job.
>>Now, I don\'t have a regular job, so I want to have a regular job.
But I decided to change job when I prepare to get a 900 grade at Toeic.
>>But I decided to change my job once I get a 900 score in the TOEIC.
>> So I am not complaining anymore.
Have a nice day and see you tonight!
>>CORRECT!^^
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