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2013-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

학생이 쓴 원문

Good Morning. Happy friday! Finally we meet weeked again. This week we had a holiday eventhough I felt tried. I will control my balance next week. Today I will study school work because I have to study 6class everyweek. and I am going to take midterm next week. Time is really fast. I always say I didn't study shool work but next week is the midterm. I think several weeks later I will say I am going to take final exam. Anyway! Have a great day and see you soon!!

강사 첨삭

Hello!

I am really glad that you take time practicing English even though you\'re busy.

It was quite a tiresome week for you, but just stay positive and be confident.

Don\'t forget to take some rest though.I know you that you\'re a smart person and that you will do great in your exams. Good luck! 

T. Lexi^^

Here are some of my corrections for you:

Good Morning. Happy friday!

>>CORRECT [Friday]

Finally we meet weeked again.
>>Finally. the weekend is near again.

This week we had a holiday eventhough I felt tried.

>>CORRECT [even though]
I will control my balance next week.

>> CORRECT
Today I will study school work because I have to study 6class everyweek.

>> Today, I will be studying my lessons because I have to take 6 classes every week.
and I am going to take midterm next week.

>>I am going to take the midterms next week.
Time is really fast.

>> CORRECT
I always say I didn\'t study shool work but next week is the midterm.

>> I always tell myself not to study but next week is already the midterms.
I think several weeks later I will say I am going to take final exam.

>>I think several weeks from now, I am going to take the final exam.
Anyway!
Have a great day and see you soon!!

>>Anyway, have a great day and see you soon!^^

 

 

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