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2010-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name] camille Hello~~ It's a happy sunday. Im nice to talking to you eveyday! I have here the example for working somthing Let's start!! we received 8,000,000 won expect 500,000won We need evidence for expenses and we can't pay without your boss's sign. I can image you have tough time nevertheless you gone on vacation. You must use same cost center with your boss. We can't pay this Friday Because Mr.Ziehr is away on business trip. He is in conference just now Plese call back around 2PM. So Ms camille ... I cant remember example for working somthing anymore. That's all!! Have a nice evening and see you tomorrow!! Best regards!

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Hi [이름]! Good day! I am glad that you shared what you have in mind. I'm flattered that you love speaking with me. I feel the same way, too. I hope you also have a good day. Take care! ^_^ Dear [Name] camille>> Dear [Name]. [Name],Hello~~ It's a happy sunday. >> Hello! It's a beautiful Sunday! Im nice to talking to you eveyday! >> It is nice talking to you everyday. I have here the example for working something >> I am going to share to you something. >> I am going to share you something. Let's start!! >> Let me start. we received 8,000,000 won expect 500,000won >> We received 8,000,000 won but expected only 500,000 We need evidence for expenses and we can't pay without your boss's sign. >> We need some evidence for our expenses and we can't pay without your boss' approval. I can image you have tough time nevertheless you gone on vacation. >> I can imagine that you are having a tough time even if you went on a vacation. You must use same cost center with your boss. >> You must use the same formula your boss uses. We can't pay this Friday Because Mr.Ziehr is away on business trip. >> We can't pay this Friday because Mr. [Name] is on a business trip He is in conference just now Plese call back around 2PM. >> He is in a conference now. Please give him a call back at 2pm. So Ms camille ... >> So Ms. [Name], I cant remember example for working somthing anymore.>> I couldnt remember anymore some examples for working something.That's all!! >> That's all for now. Have a nice evening and see you tomorrow!!>> correct Best regards! >> Correct  

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