Hello :)
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I used to prefer to go to restaurants, but nowadays I'm interested in cooking. So, when I'm alone, I make my dishes for my meal! It's really fun for me, and whatever that food's result is, I like to eat foods. Sometimes, when the ingredient for food isn't exist, that could be kind of bothersome thing. However, except that case, I really prefer to make my own food and eat that wonderful creation. HA HA!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
A great night to you! I envy you because you can make your own creation! Hahaha.
I think you have to tell me your secret in cooking.
Sleep tight and rest well!
Teacher Lexi :)
Here are my corrections:
I used to prefer to go to restaurants, but nowadays I\'m interested in cooking.
>>Correct :)
>>OR: Previously, I prefer going to restaurants but nowadays, I\'m interested in cooking.
So, when I\'m alone, I make my dishes for my meal!
>>Correct ^^
>>So when I\'m alone, I prepare my own dish/meal.
It\'s really fun for me, and whatever that food\'s result is, I like to eat foods.
>>It\'s really fun for me, and whatever the food\'s result is, I still like to eat it.
Sometimes, when the ingredient for food isn\'t exist, that could be kind of bothersome thing.
>>Sometimes when the ingredient for the food doesn\'t exist, it can be a bothersome thing.
However, except that case, I really prefer to make my own food and eat that wonderful creation. HA HA!
>>Correct !! great!
A great night to you! I envy you because you can make your own creation! Hahaha.
I think you have to tell me your secret in cooking.
Sleep tight and rest well!
Teacher Lexi :)
Here are my corrections:
I used to prefer to go to restaurants, but nowadays I\'m interested in cooking.
>>Correct :)
>>OR: Previously, I prefer going to restaurants but nowadays, I\'m interested in cooking.
So, when I\'m alone, I make my dishes for my meal!
>>Correct ^^
>>So when I\'m alone, I prepare my own dish/meal.
It\'s really fun for me, and whatever that food\'s result is, I like to eat foods.
>>It\'s really fun for me, and whatever the food\'s result is, I still like to eat it.
Sometimes, when the ingredient for food isn\'t exist, that could be kind of bothersome thing.
>>Sometimes when the ingredient for the food doesn\'t exist, it can be a bothersome thing.
However, except that case, I really prefer to make my own food and eat that wonderful creation. HA HA!
>>Correct !! great!
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