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2014-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Janice

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Today is gloomy day. A big accident happened two days ago; Liner founder in the south sea. A great many peaple were disappeared by this accident. I pray that they are rescued as soon as possible .

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!   How\'s weekend? I hope that you had a great weekend. Yes I know how sad it is to watch the news about the accident recently happened. Everything happens for a reason. There are things that we don\'t want to happend but have to accept, things we don\'t want to know but have to learn, and people we can\'t live without but have to let go. Nothing can ever take away the love a heart holds dear. Memories linger everyday. Remembrance keeps them near. So life must go on.   Teacher Janice. See you in class.   Today is gloomy day. >> Today is a gloomy day.A big accident happened two days ago; Liner founder in the south sea. >> A big accident happened two days ago. Liner was found in Southern part of the sea.A great many peaple were disappeared by this accident. >> Many great people disappeared brought about by the accident.I pray that they are rescued as soon as possible . >> I pray that they will be rescued as soon as possible.  

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