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2014-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Janice

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Hello teacher. janice Do you have a any matter tonight? I miss you ㅠㅠ I am sorry for my attitude last class. I guess you were upset. I apologize again. sooooorry..teacher. I went to Riverside to enjoy a water sports with friends last weekend. We haven't enjoyed a water sports. We were first time when enjoy a water sports we were very excited in water sports It is a good leisure sports. and we had a barbecue party till late at night. we had a happy weekend. I hope to see you next class. Have a good day.^^

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Hello there handsome [이름]!!   How was your weekend? It\'s nice to know that you enjoyed your weekend with your friends.   Well, thank you for your concern [이름], but I am very ok. We just had a emergency at home that I need to attend. Don\'t say sorry because it was not at all your fault why I was absent yesterday. Don\'t think I got upset when you were sleepy during our last class last week. haha   Well, it\'s nice to know that you went to the Riverside with your friends. I just hope you were not wasted.. haha   See you in class [이름]! Let\'s start this week with a smile in our face.   Teacher Janice     Hello teacher. janice>> Hello Teacher Janice!Do you have a any matter tonight?>> Do you have any problems tonight?I miss you ㅠㅠ>> I miss you.I am sorry for my attitude last class.>> Correct I guess you were upset.>> Correct I apologize again. sooooorry..teacher.>> I apologize again. I am [Name] teacher. (Don\'t be) I went to Riverside to enjoy a water sports with friends last weekend.>> I went to the Riverside with my friends to enjoy water sports last weekend.We haven\'t enjoyed a water sports.>> We didn\'t enjoy water sports.We were first time when enjoy a water sports>> We enjoyed water sports when it was our first time.we were very excited in water sports>> We were very excited in water sports.It is a good leisure sports.>> It is a good leisure sport.and we had a barbecue party till late at night.>> We had a barbecue party until late at night.we had a happy weekend.>> We had a happy weekend.I hope to see you next class.>> I hope to see you on our next class. (You will) Have a good day.^^ >> Correct  

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