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2011-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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Question : Do you think young people are more or less fit than 50 years old? Answer(my opinion) : I think that young people are less fit than 50 years ago. Nowdays, many people are interested in their healthy. Although people are able to eat food easily from fast food, they can control their healthy. For example, controling from exercise and checking the food ingredients.

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Hi [이름]! I agree with your opinion. Health fitness doesn’t merely depend in our age but also in our eating habits and lifestyle, right? Anyway, I have included some corrections for your improvement. I hope this helps! Take care! -T. Louise-   Question : Do you think young people are more or less fit than 50 years old? >> Correct.Answer(my opinion) : I think that young people are less fit than 50 years ago. >> I think that young people are less fit than people in their 50’s.  Nowdays, many people are interested in their healthy. >> Nowadays, many people are very conscious of their health. Although people are able to eat food easily from fast food, they can control their healthy. >> Although people are able to eat food easily from fast food, they still take care of their health. For example, controling from exercise and checking the food ingredients. >> An example of taking care of our health is exercising and checking the food’s ingredients.

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