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2011-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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Question : In what way is your diet different from when you were a young child ? Answer(my opinion) : When I was young, I usually ate the food to make my mother. My mother cooked to use only fresh and clean ingredients. Now, I live by myself, so I tend to eat too much jusk food or I usually eat the food at the restrant near the my house.

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Hi [이름]! Sometimes, we change differently from who we were before. There are certain things that we used to do that we don’t do at the present time. Anyway, I have included the corrections of your composition for your further improvement. Take care, [이름]. I’ll see you again tomorrow! -T. Louise-   Question : In what way is your diet different from when you were a young child ? >> Question: In what way is your diet different when you were a young child and now that you’re already grown up? Answer(my opinion) : When I was young, I usually ate the food to make my mother. >> Answer (my opinion): When I was young, I used to eat the food cooked by my mother. My mother cooked to use only fresh and clean ingredients. >> My mother uses only fresh and clean ingredients when she’s cooking. Now, I live by myself, so I tend to eat too much jusk food or I usually eat the food at the restrant near the my house. >> But now that I already live by myself, I tend to eat too much junk food and I am already fond of eating in the restaurant near my house.

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