Hello~~

2011-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Hello.. my teacher~~ Now is.. [이름]'s younger sister writing. She said " I am greatful my teacher. First.. I don't say in English anyway. But now is I can say some words and confidence."

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Hello sister, Please tell [이름] that I will always be very happy to be her teacher. I would also love to know your name.  Thank you so much for sending me her messages. I would love to talk to her each day. You both take care, ---connie --- Hello.. my teacher~~ >> CorrectNow is..[이름]'s younger sister writing. >> These is [이름]’s younger sister writing. She said " I am greatful my teacher. >> She said, “I’m greatful for my teacher”. First.. I don't say in English anyway. >> At first, I can’t say English words. But now is I can say some words and confidence." >> But now, I can say some words with confidence.

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