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2014-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello I guess you are on your way back home now. I can not believe that you wake up every 3:30am. It is soooo amazing and I can't never do that. I think my work for today is already done. I am already get bored. haha Please add me on your facebook. [이메일] see you tomorrow. have a good taking a nap^^

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for dropping by in the composition board. I think you are not busy at work already. I hope that you will enjoy the rest of your day. Take care on your way home as well. See you tomorrow.

~Kelly~

Hello

>> Correct.
I guess you are on your way back home now.

>> Correct.
I can not believe that you wake up every 3:30am. It is soooo amazing and I can\'t never do that.

>> Correct.
I think my work for today is already done.

>> Correct.
I am already get bored. haha
>> I am already bored. haha
Please add me on your facebook.

>> Correct.
[이메일]
>> Correct.
see you tomorrow.

>> Correct.
have a good taking a nap^^

>>Enjoy your nap.

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