hello!
학생이 쓴 원문
these day, l'm so happy because my brother came to jeju to meet me.
we go to eating something nice or study somthing in library together.
l really enjoy it. because i can do anything with someone after the
winter vacation started.
so i'm happy to do everything with my brother.
he is very kind and cool. and he is good at understanding what i
want. next monday he will go back to my hometown.
if i thought that he leave, i'm so sad.
so i think just enjoying this moment.
강사 첨삭
[이름]! I'm really happy to hear about that! And yes you are right, you should enjoy very moment of it! So enjoy the weekend! Tell your brother I said hi!
Take care!
T.Bianca
these day, l'm so happy because my brother came to jeju to meet me.>>These day, I'm so happy because my brother came to Jeju to meet me.we go to eating something nice or study somthing in library together.>>We will go and eat something nice or maybe study in the library together.l really enjoy it. because i can do anything with someone after the winter vacation started.>>I will really enjoy it because I can finally do something with somebody after the winter vacation.so i'm happy to do everything with my brother.>>So I am happy to be doing it with my brother.he is very kind and cool. and he is good at understanding what i want.
>>He is very kind and cool and he is also good at understanding what I want.
next monday he will go back to my hometown. >>On Monday he will be going back to our hometown.if i thought that he leave, i'm so sad.>>Thinking that he will leave so soon makes me sad.so i think just enjoying this moment.
>>So I thought that we should enjoy every moment together.
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