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You are very cute!^^

Thank you for sharing those information. But I don\'t exactly know what did Germany do to Israelites. Could you tell me in class?

Looking forward for that.

And yes! I agree with you. Be the change you want to see in the world.

Good Job!

See you later.

-T.Naomi

Today, I\'d like to write about Israel.
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One day, When i was in America i visited a holocost museum where is located in D.C
>>One day, When I was in America I visited a holocaust museum located in D.C. (the promoun I is always capital letter)
When i got there, i was shocked. There are two reasons.
>>When I got there, I was shocked. There are two reasons.
>>OR: When I got there, I was shocked for two reasons.
First of all, the things What Germany did to Israel. i was so mad. Korea has a
the same painful experience.

>>First is what Germany did to Israel. I was so mad. Korea has the same painful experience.
i mean that country was conquered so i could felf
sympathy as Israelan. i thouht several times that How did people do that?
>>I mean, that country was conquered so I could felt sympathy to the Israelites. I thought several times how could people do that?
Secondly, Facility of museum. There are a lof of museumes in D.C.
>>Second is the facility in the museum. There are a lof of museums in D.C.
Almost of museumes\'s facility are great!. Of course, holocost museum is too.
>>Almost all museum facilities are great! Of course, the holocost museum too.
That time i thought about Korea museum. i couldn\'t dare compare with ours.
>>At that time, I thought about Korean museum. I couldn\'t dare to compare with ours. ( say Korean when using it as an adjective)
I knew operating systems of museum are different. American museum gets a lot of
donations from many rich people for managering.

>>I knew that the operating system of museums differ from each other. American museum gets a lot of donations from many rich people for management.

But i want to talk about effort!
>>But I want to talk about effort!
so i did self-reflection for a little time. What should i do for this problem!?
>>So, I did self-reflection for a little time. What should I do for this problem!?
My answer was hard study and To be good person who can change the world!.
>>My answer was to hard study and to be a good person who can change the world!
GOOD LUCK!!

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