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-T.Naomi

Today I\'d like to write about my journey.

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I wanted to trevel an America since i was elementary student.
>>I wanted to travel America since I was an elementary student.
A year ago, i finally got my dream.
>>A year ago, I dream finally came true.
i got a chance to go to an America. Luckily, there is my aunt in America
>>I got a chance to go to America. Luckily, my aunt is in America.
It made me easily go to America. But processing to go to America was not easy.
>>It made easy for me to go to America. But processing to go to America was not easy.
The hardest thihg was what get visa.
>>The hardest thing was getting visa.
There are a lof of people want go to America. And some people do bad things.
>>There are a lot of people who want to go to America. And some people do bad things.
So American gavornment little bit permits that people come to America.
>>So American government is strict to people who come to America.
When i was in embassy, i was soo nervous because of visa.
>>When I was in the embassy, I was soo nervous because of my visa.
If i did\'t get it, i could\'t go to America.
>>If I did\'t get it,  couldn\'t go to America.
I prayed to the GOD. pleas, help me.
>>I prayed to GOD. please, help me.
After i did interview, i got a yello card. i meaned i must send supplymentary document
to embassy.

>>After I was interviewed, I got a yellow card. It mean I must send supplementary document
to the embassy.
And then, they are going to dicide whether to go to America or not.
>>And then, they are going to decide whether I will be able to go to America or not.
Time\'s gone by sooooo slow, when i was waiting result about visa.
>>Time\'s gone by sooooo slow, while I was waiting for my visa.
Finailly, i got a visa i could go to America.
>>Finailly, I got a visa and I could go to America.
i\'m going to write next episode next time.
comeing soon. see you~ bye

>>I\'m going to write the next episode next time.
Coming soon. See you~ bye (Capital letter after period)