Hello!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello,teacher!The weather is beautiful in Korea.I can feel that spring is just around the corner.
I'm so sorry for my attitude in my class and thanks a lot for you to understand me.I know I need to be more active to learn english,try to do my best and have to do my homework well.I am probably not a multitasker.I have a good news.Maybe I can rest on sundays coming June this year.I'm so excited.I really want to travel many places with my family.Have a nice day!!
강사 첨삭
Hi there,
Thank you so much for your composition. Don't worry I totally understand your situation. Take care! See you tomorrow.
-T. Sally-
Hello,teacher!The weather is beautiful in Korea.
>>Correct
I can feel that spring is just around the corner.
>>CorrectI'm so sorry for my attitude in my class and thanks a lot for you to understand me.
>>I'm so sorry for my attitude in my class and thanks a lot because you canunderstand me.
I know I need to be more active to learn english,try to do my best and have to do my homework well.
>>Correct
I am probably not a multitasker.
>>Correct
I have a good news.
>>Correct
Maybe I can rest on sundays coming June this year.
>>Correct
I'm so excited.
>>CorrectI really want to travel many places with my family.
>>I really want to travel to many places with my family.
Have a nice day!!
>>Correct
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