Hello!

2011-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello,teacher!The weather is beautiful in Korea.I can feel that spring is just around the corner. I'm so sorry for my attitude in my class and thanks a lot for you to understand me.I know I need to be more active to learn english,try to do my best and have to do my homework well.I am probably not a multitasker.I have a good news.Maybe I can rest on sundays coming June this year.I'm so excited.I really want to travel many places with my family.Have a nice day!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there,         Thank you so much for your composition. Don't worry I totally understand your situation. Take care! See you tomorrow. -T. Sally- Hello,teacher!The weather is beautiful in Korea. >>Correct I can feel that spring is just around the corner. >>CorrectI'm so sorry for my attitude in my class and thanks a lot for you to understand me. >>I'm so sorry for my attitude in my class and thanks a lot because you canunderstand me. I know I need to be more active to learn english,try to do my best and have to do my homework well. >>Correct I am probably not a multitasker. >>Correct I have a good news. >>Correct Maybe I can rest on sundays coming June this year. >>Correct I'm so excited. >>CorrectI really want to travel many places with my family. >>I really want to travel to many places with my family. Have a nice day!! >>Correct

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