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-T.Naomi
Today, I\'d like to write about badminton. Before I went to America, one of my friend suggested me to play a badminton.
>>Today, I\'d like to write about badminton. Before I went to America, one of my friends suggested to me to play badminton.
Usually, When we said \"playing a badminton, It means just light a exercise. I mean that It can\'t makes me exhausted.
>>Usually, when we said \"playing badminton\", it means it is just a light exercise. I mean that it can\'t make me exhausted.
So, When I went there for badminton, I was shocked. It was totally diffrent with what I thought. Badminton is really super a hard sport and fun.
>>So, When I went there for badminton, I was shocked. It was totally diffrent with what I thought. Badminton is a really super hard sport and fun.
At the first, I played with old women. (Usually, people play a badminton double) Me and my friend were one team verse old wowen were one team.
>>At the first, I played with old women. (Usually, people play badminton double) Me and my friend were in one team versus old women who were also in one team.
I thought that It would be a easy game or just It couldn\'t be a game. However as soon as played a game, I realized that I was wrong.
>>I thought that it would be an easy game or just it couldn\'t be a game. However as soon as played a game, I realized that I was wrong.
We were defeated. Of course our minds were distoryed. But, It maked me interested in badminton. After that day, I played a badminton twice of week.
>>We were defeated. Of course our minds were distorted. But, it made me interested in badminton. After that day, I played badminton twice a week.
But, these days I can\'t. I don\'t have a time for it.
>>But, these days I can\'t. I don\'t have time for it.
I want to play a badminton.
>>I want to play badminton.
bye...
>>Bye.
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