hello!
학생이 쓴 원문
i empressed that you said to me "don't be sad I'm sure there is
always a next time... " when my brother came back to my hometown.
it's a very good word.
it can apply all of our life.
sometime, i have a tendency i despressed when i fall exam .
i know that's not good, and the best is i study something
concistantly without emotion.
but it's hard to me.
so i will think your word everyday.
thank you for giving me a great comlacency of mind.
강사 첨삭
My dearest [이름], that really touched me, it’s nice to know that someone llistens and cares about my advices sometimes. And yes! Remember to stay positive at all times, take each failure as an opportunity for you to succeed instead. Failure means challenge! Failures always gives us a chance to become better and not to let the same mistakes happen again. Also, remember that in the end, everything happens for a good reason, so smile and be positive.
t.Bianca
i empressed that you said to me "don't be sad I'm sure there is always a next time... " when my brother came back to my hometown.it's a very good word.
>>I was relieved when you told me not to be sad and that there is always a next time, when I told you about my brother leaving for home. It was a very nice thing to say.it can apply all of our life.
>>We can do it all our lives.sometime, i have a tendency i despressed when i fall exam .
>>Sometimes, I have the tendecy to feel depressed when I fail an exam.i know that's not good, and the best is i study something concistantly without emotion.
>>I know that’s not good and that the best thing I can do is to study harder without feeling upset or frustrated.but it's hard to me.
>>But it is hard for me.so i will think your word everyday.
>>So I will always remember what you have said.thank you for giving me a great comlacency of mind.
>>Thank you for giving me a great sense of complacency.
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