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2011-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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good evening. bianca~ i sold my rice cooker and the other kichen utensils on second-hand. because i don't have to cook in dorm. so, at first i upload a memoradum on the my university's homepage without photo.because it is tiresome. then some people sent me a message. they said "could you send me a photo taking your matarials?" and i send them what they want. one person told me that cut down prise ,i said no. i reupload my memoradum with photo. then somenone call me right away, and he said " i will go now." so i sold my materials. i recieve 50000 won, and i think that i will apply toeic on march with this money. have a nice day~

강사 첨삭

Wow congratulations!! Sold out huh?! Well I guess that is the most practical thing to do and also a very very smart move! Great job!!   T.Bianca good evening. bianca~i sold my rice cooker and the other kichen utensils on second-hand. >> I sold my rice cooker and the other kitchen utensils on bargain.because i don't have to cook in dorm. >>Because I don’t have to cook in the dorm.so, at first i upload a memoradum on the my university's homepage without photo.because it is tiresome. >>So, first, I uploaded an advertisement in my University’s homepage, without a photo because it is tiresome.then some people sent me a message. >>correctthey said "could you send me a photo taking your matarials?" >>They asked if I could send a photo of my stuffand i send them what they want. >>correctone person told me that cut down prise ,i said no. >>One person told me to cut down the price, but I said no.i reupload my memoradum with photo. then somenone call me right away, and he said " i will go now." so i sold my materials. >>I reuploaded my “ad” with photos then someone called me right away and bought all the utensils.i recieve 50000 won, and i think that i will apply toeic on march with this money. have a nice day~ >>I sold a total of 50000 and I think I will use it for my TOIEC in March.

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