hello~
학생이 쓴 원문
good evening. bianca~
i sold my rice cooker and the other kichen utensils on second-hand.
because i don't have to cook in dorm.
so, at first i upload a memoradum on the my university's homepage without photo.because it is tiresome.
then some people sent me a message.
they said "could you send me a photo taking your matarials?"
and i send them what they want.
one person told me that cut down prise ,i said no.
i reupload my memoradum with photo. then somenone call me right away, and he said " i will go now." so i sold my materials.
i recieve 50000 won, and i think that i will apply toeic on march with this money. have a nice day~
강사 첨삭
Wow congratulations!! Sold out huh?! Well I guess that is the most practical thing to do and also a very very smart move! Great job!!
T.Bianca
good evening. bianca~i sold my rice cooker and the other kichen utensils on second-hand.
>> I sold my rice cooker and the other kitchen utensils on bargain.because i don't have to cook in dorm.
>>Because I don’t have to cook in the dorm.so, at first i upload a memoradum on the my university's homepage without photo.because it is tiresome.
>>So, first, I uploaded an advertisement in my University’s homepage, without a photo because it is tiresome.then some people sent me a message.
>>correctthey said "could you send me a photo taking your matarials?"
>>They asked if I could send a photo of my stuffand i send them what they want.
>>correctone person told me that cut down prise ,i said no.
>>One person told me to cut down the price, but I said no.i reupload my memoradum with photo. then somenone call me right away, and he said " i will go now." so i sold my materials.
>>I reuploaded my “ad” with photos then someone called me right away and bought all the utensils.i recieve 50000 won, and i think that i will apply toeic on march with this money. have a nice day~
>>I sold a total of 50000 and I think I will use it for my TOIEC in March.
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