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2011-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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hi!! nice to meet you at morning. i think you are a kind person aren't you? haha i can feel that throught your voice. these days, i'm very busy because of classes and party of friendship. i just arrive at home after small party . i will study English hard next week. i will go to the road, the name of olle.. (i can't comform the english name) people say when we walk that long road, we can forget about stress and recover relationship naturally because they become to talk to each other when they walk the long way.so i want to go there and rethink about myself and step back. have a nice weekend and see you next week!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! I'm glad to meet you, too. I am sure that we will have a good time in practicing your English every morning. Let's take it easy. Keep in mind that English is fun! Let us talk about stress reliever on Monday. Have a fun weekend! It's me, Joanna hi!! >>Hi!nice to meet you at morning. >>It was nice meeting this morning.i think you are a kind person aren't you? Haha >>I think you are kind, aren't you? >>It seems that you are a kind person, aren't you?i can feel that throught your voice. >>I can feel that from your voice.these days, i'm very busy because of classes and party of friendship. >>These days, I was very busy because of attending my classes and partying with friends.i just arrive at home after small party . >>I just arrive at home after a small party.i will study English hard next week. >>I will study English hard next week. i will go to the road, the name of olle.. (i can't comform the english name)  >>I will go walking on the road named Olle. (I can't find the English term of it.)people say when we walk that long road, we can forget about stress and recover relationship naturally because they become to talk to each other when they walk the long way. >>People say that walking along that long road can help you forget stress. It can bring back broken relationships when couples talk while walking on the said road. so i want to go there and rethink about myself and step back. >>Because of that, I want to try  to go there and have a self-discovery.have a nice weekend and see you next week! >>Have a nice weekend and see you next week! *** Use a capital letter to begin a sentence or to begin speech.

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