hello^^
학생이 쓴 원문
hello!!!
long time no see, isn't it??
from thurseday to sunday, i leaved in jeju.
you know what??lucky came to me.
as you know, my home town is kyoung-ki-do.
so i really want to go my home last weekend. ( the place of my
activity is very closed to my home town.)
but the staff who control our schedule said to me i couldn't do that.
so i was very disappointed.
thurseday, after the call, i went to airport and the staff said " did you want to buy a ticket by one way??"
so i said " yes, but you talked me i couldn't do that"
i realized that the staff had a mistake because of the similler name of my crew. my crew have to take a test on weekend. and she get a benefit because of special situation .
to be continued by calling...:)
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Glad to have received your message minutes before our practice time! Hahaha.
You were really blessed… and lucky!
Take care always!
It’s me,
T. Joanna
hello!!!
>>Hello!long time no see, isn't it??
>>Long time no talk!from thurseday to sunday, i leaved in jeju.
>>From Thursday to Sunday, I stayed in Jeju.you know what??lucky came to me.
>>You know what? Luck came to me! as you know, my home town is kyoung-ki-do.
>>As you know, Kyoung-ki-do is my hometown.so i really want to go my home last weekend. ( the place of my activity is very closed to my home town.)
>>I really wanted to go home last weekend because I was doing a project in a place near my hometown.but the staff who control our schedule said to me i couldn't do that.
>>I asked the staff, who controls our schedules said it’s not possible for me to do it.so i was very disappointed.
>>I was very disappointed then.thurseday, after the call, i went to airport and the staff said " did you want to buy a ticket by one way??"
>>Last Thursday, right after our conversation, I went to the airport and the staff asked me, “Did you buy a one-way ticket?”so i said " yes, but you talked me i couldn't do that"
>>I answered her, “Yes, but you told me I couldn’t do that.”i realized that the staff had a mistake because of the similler name of my crew. my crew have to take a test on weekend. and she get a benefit because of special situation .>>I came to realize that the staff committed the mistake because of an individual who have the same name as mine. The person has to take a test on the weekend so she is benefited not to come with us.to be continued by calling...:)
>>I will continue the story when you call.
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