hello^^

2011-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

학생이 쓴 원문

hello!!! long time no see, isn't it?? from thurseday to sunday, i leaved in jeju. you know what??lucky came to me. as you know, my home town is kyoung-ki-do. so i really want to go my home last weekend. ( the place of my activity is very closed to my home town.) but the staff who control our schedule said to me i couldn't do that. so i was very disappointed. thurseday, after the call, i went to airport and the staff said " did you want to buy a ticket by one way??" so i said " yes, but you talked me i couldn't do that" i realized that the staff had a mistake because of the similler name of my crew. my crew have to take a test on weekend. and she get a benefit because of special situation . to be continued by calling...:)

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Glad to have received your message minutes before our practice time! Hahaha. You were really blessed… and lucky! Take care always! It’s me, T. Joanna   hello!!! >>Hello!long time no see, isn't it?? >>Long time no talk!from thurseday to sunday, i leaved in jeju. >>From Thursday to Sunday, I stayed in Jeju.you know what??lucky came to me. >>You know what? Luck came to me! as you know, my home town is kyoung-ki-do. >>As you know, Kyoung-ki-do is my hometown.so i really want to go my home last weekend. ( the place of my activity is very closed to my home town.) >>I really wanted to go home last weekend because I was doing a project in a place near my hometown.but the staff who control our schedule said to me i couldn't do that. >>I asked the staff, who controls our schedules said it’s not possible for me to do it.so i was very disappointed. >>I was very disappointed then.thurseday, after the call, i went to airport and the staff said " did you want to buy a ticket by one way??" >>Last Thursday, right after our conversation, I went to the airport and the staff asked me, “Did you buy a one-way ticket?”so i said " yes, but you talked me i couldn't do that" >>I answered her, “Yes, but you told me I couldn’t do that.”i realized that the staff had a mistake because of the similler name of my crew. my crew have to take a test on weekend. and she get a benefit because of special situation .>>I came to realize that the staff committed the mistake because of an individual who have the same name as mine. The person has to take a test on the weekend so she is benefited not to come with us.to be continued by calling...:) >>I will continue the story when you call.

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