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What is your opinion about this topic, "Success is only achieved through discipline and hard work."? I agree it and I believe it. However nowadays most young people believe that they need background and a lot of money for success. I want to talk them that success is only their hard work.

Hi [이름]! ^^ How are you? Well, I do agree with your opinion that success can be achieved through hard work. Nothing will happen if you just sit down and do nothing. Money won\'t chase you. People do. So, we have to work for our money. By the waym please study the following corrections below, okay. Have a great day ahead and see you! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris   I agree it and I believe it. >> I agree with it and I believe it.However nowadays most young people believe that they need background and a lot of money for success. >> However, nowadays most young people need Educational backgrounds and work experiences to earn a lot of money.I want to talk them that success is only their hard work. >> I want to give them an advice that success can be achieved through hard work.