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2014-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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hello I just finished my work. and I have dinner appointment with our coworker. I don't know how to call it in English. Before end of year,co-workers has dinner together and talk about what we did in this year and what will do next year. It is not a normal mean really big mean with alcohol. In Korea we open times to this, some people really like it but some people doesn't like it. Did you wish anything else for next year? My hope is to save money , learn Chiness constantly and speak English fluntely. Except them I would like learn other things also. I gotta go now. Talk to you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름]! How\'s your dinner appointment? Did it go well? I really hope so...^^ I think you are referring to year end meeting/dinner. Some companies here also have that.   Anyway, my wishes for next year are to be able to work more efficiently and to be able to finish my papers. I am planning to go abroad but there is a problem with my papers. I wish to fix everything next year. I also wish that my family stays happy and healthy. I want to change all my bad habits and start anew too. Hopefully, these will all materialize.   See you later!   ~Teacher Shanee   hello>>> Hello! I just finished my work. >>> Correct! and I have dinner appointment with our coworker. >>> And I have a dinner appointment with our co-workers.I don\'t know how to call it in English. >>> Correct! >>> OR: I don\'t know how it is called in English.Before end of year,co-workers has dinner together and talk about what we did in this year and what will do next year. >>> Before the end of the year, employees like us dine together and talk about what we did this year and our plans for the following year. >>> OR: Before the year ends, employees like us have dinner together and discuss about the things we did this year and our to-do lists for the succeeding year.It is not a normal mean really big mean with alcohol. >>> It is not merely to drink alcohol. [I\'m not really sure about what you mean here.]In Korea we open times to this, some people really like it but some people doesn\'t like it. >>> In Korea we oftentimes do this. Some people really like it but some people don\'t.Did you wish anything else for next year? >>> Correct!My hope is to save money , learn Chiness constantly and speak English fluntely. >>> Correct! [Chinese, fluently]Except them I would like learn other things also. >>> Aside from these, I would also like to learn other things.I gotta go now. >>> Correct!Talk to you tomorrow! >>> Correct!

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