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2011-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

학생이 쓴 원문

hi~ i just arrived at home.and i got a box from my mom. there are cloths, some food like instant noodle. i really happy today. because i'm really satisfied with my lectures. i'm taking a 23grade in now. (do you understand what i say?? 23 means the time which i spend to take lecture in one week.) so i thougth that it's too hard for me. as expected, it ask me lots of things and i have to prepare reference about lecture contents. but i think it's very informative for me. and my professors are very zealous. but, as you know, i really tired at night. so i will go to bed . see you pretty~~~~

강사 첨삭

Hey Pretty Girl..^^

It seems that you really had a very busy day. I’m glad that you’re doing great with your studies..

More power in all your endevours. Goodluck!

~~Joanna~~

 

Here are your corrections:

hi~
>>CORRECT^^
i just arrived at home.

>>I just arrived home.

and i got a box from my mom.
>>CORRECT^^
there are cloths, some food like instant noodle.
>>There are clothes, some food like instant noodle.
i really happy today.

>>I’m really happy today.

because i'm really satisfied with my lectures.
>>CORRECT^^
i'm taking a 23grade in now.
>>This is my 23rd day.
(do you understand what i say?? 23 means the time which i spend to take lecture in one week.)
>> did you understand what i said? 23 means the times i spend to take lecture in a week.
so i thougth that it's too hard for me.
>>So I thought that it’s too hard for me.
as expected, it ask me lots of things and i have to prepare reference about lecture contents.
 >>As expected, I was asked with a lot of questions and I have to prepare a reference about the lecture contents.
but i think it's very informative for me.
>>CORRECT^^
and my professors are very zealous.
>>CORRECT^^
but, as you know, i really tired at night.
>>But as you know I’m really tired at night.
so i will go to bed.

>>So I will go to bed now.

see you pretty~~~~

>> CORRECT^^ haha

 

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