hello!
학생이 쓴 원문
hi~
today, it was rain. was seoul, too?
in jeju, rain camed all day long.
do you like rain?? how about snow?
i don't like snow because the road is very dirty after snow comes.
jeju is warmer than seoul, but there is lots of snow every winter.
last winter vacation, i stayed in jeju for my study.
( i can't study in my home because of family and tv...etc)
that time, i measured that lt was snow every day except 5day on one
month.
i hope tommorow will be shine :)
see ya~
강사 첨삭
Good evening, fabulous [이름]!
Yes, I do love rain if it is a good rain. I live in an agricultural province so most of the people in my place are farmers who need water for their farmers. Fortunately, we don't have snow in my country. And I've never wished of having snow in my country. ^^
Let's talk tomorrow. Have a good night and a beauty rest.
I always care,
-Joanna-
hi~
>>Hi!
today, it was rain. was seoul, too?
>>It is raining today. How about in Seoul?
in jeju, rain camed all day long.
>>It was raining all day long here in Jeju.
do you like rain?? how about snow?
>>Do you like rainy weather? How about snow?
>>Do you like rain? How about snow?
i don't like snow because the road is very dirty after snow comes.
>>I don't like snow because it causes the road inconvenience and it looks dirt.
jeju is warmer than seoul, but there is lots of snow every winter.
>>Jeju is warmer than Seoul but experiences more snow in winter.
last winter vacation, i stayed in jeju for my study.
>>Last winter vacation, I stayed in Jeju for my studies.
( i can't study in my home because of family and tv...etc)
>>I can't stand studying at home because I am disturbed by my family, TV, etc.
that time, i measured that lt was snow every day except 5day on one month.
>>At that time, I observed that it snowed every day except the fifth day of the month.
i hope tommorow will be shine :)
>>I hope tomorrow the sun will shine.
see ya~
>>See yah!
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