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I had a long vacation last week. During my long vacation, I did a lot of thing. First day, I had to cook a lot of food so I went to mark and bought a lot of things for ceremoney of forefather. Second days, My family had a ceremoney for forefather. Also, my children said "Happy New Years and Have a good your health." and bowed to my husband and I for New Years. My husband and I gave them some money to celebrate New Years. Third days, My sister's family-in-law visited my house. My family and her family played called yunnori which is a traditional of Korean. This game is a similar board game. My family won with yunnori. Fourth days, my family went to the department store. We bought a new desk, a new bag and some clothes for my children because my youngest daughter will go to elementary school. Fifth days, we watched a movie entitled "Begin Again." I was happy but I rose my weight.

Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for sharing to me about your holiday! ^^ Wow! You were busy!^^ You must be very tired during those days. :) It\'s really cute actually because your children greeted you a Happy New Year. Your children love you very much. :) I also wish you a good health for this year so that you will be strong enough to pamper your children and to watch them grow. :) Good luck [이름] and take care always! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris   I had a long vacation last week. >> CorrectDuring my long vacation, I did a lot of thing. >> During my long vacation, I did a lot of things.First day, I had to cook a lot of food so I went to mark and bought a lot of things for ceremoney of forefather. >> For the first day, I had to cook a lot of food so I went to MARK\'s and bought a lot of things for the ceremony for the death of my forefather.Second days, My family had a ceremoney for forefather. >> For the second day, my family had the ceremony.Also, my children said \"Happy New Years and Have a good your health.\" and bowed to my husband and I for New Years. >> Also, my children said \"Happy New Year and may you have a good health.\" and  my husband and I bowed together for the New Year.My husband and I gave them some money to celebrate New Years. >> My husband and I gave them some money to celebrate for the New Year.Third days, My sister\'s family-in-law visited my house.>> For the third day, my sister\'s family-in-law visited my house. My family and her family played called yunnori which is a traditional of Korean. >> My family and her family played a game called Yunnori which is a traditional game of Korea.This game is a similar board game. >> This game is similar to a board game.My family won with yunnori. >> My family won the game. Fourth days, my family went to the department store. >> For the fourth day, my family went to the department store. We bought a new desk, a new bag and some clothes for my children because my youngest daughter will go to elementary school. >> We bought a new desk, a new bag and some clothes for my children because my youngest daughter will go to elementary school. Fifth days, we watched a movie entitled \"Begin Again.\" >> For the fifth day, we watched a movie entitled, \"Begin Again\".I was happy but I rose my weight. >> I was happy but my weight increased.