Hello~
학생이 쓴 원문
Happy Friday:)
I was pleased to take our class.
I want to start a class from lesson 20.
Because questions are about works.
Anyway, here is about my foverite teacher.
A few days ago, I knew a professor who teach employee-employer relationship.
He emphasizes on relationship between humans.
He induces all of the class's students to become close friends.
So, we have a lot of team project and he have lots of time for students like meeting his students.
He is interested in local small businesses so, he want to share our thinking about activating local economy.
I respect him because he loves his job and his students and he has a personal charm.
Today is April 1 and a clear day.
Spring is really here.
Have a lovely day like today's weather.
I will miss you during my weekend.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I wish you a happy Friday too. It was great reading your composition. You really are good in making sentences. Keep it up!! I know that you can achieve your goal. I will also miss you this weekend. Anyway, I want you to enjoy and I will be seeing you on Monday. Take care always.
T. Venus
Happy Friday:)
>>Correct.
>>I wish you a happy Friday.I was pleased to take our class.
>>I was pleased with our class together.I want to start a class from lesson 20.
>>Correct.
>>I would like to start the class from lesson 20.Because questions are about works.
>>The reason is because the topics are all about works.Anyway, here is about my foverite teacher.
>>Anyway, here is about my favorite teacher.A few days ago, I knew a professor who teach employee-employer relationship.
>>A few days ago, I knew a professor who taught us about employee-employer relationship.
He emphasizes on relationship between humans.
>>He emphasized on relationship between humans.
He induces all of the class's students to become close friends.
>>Correct.
>>He recommends all of the students in our class to become close friends.
So, we have a lot of team project and he have lots of time for students like meeting his students.
>>So we are given a lot of team projects and we have lots of time for meeting his students.He is interested in local small businesses so, he want to share our thinking about activating local economy.
>>He is interested in local small business so, he wanted to share his own knowledge about activating local economy.I respect him because he loves his job and his students and he has a personal charm.
>>correct.
>>I respect him because he loves his job and students and also he has a personal charm. Today is April 1 and a clear day.>>Correct.
>>Today is April 1 and it is a clear day.
Spring is really here.>>Correct.
Have a lovely day like today's weather.
>>Correct.I will miss you during my weekend.
>>Correct.
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