hello
학생이 쓴 원문
good evening tutor
today i want to sleep early but have to do excercise
i think i seem to get a bit fat!!
recently i made foreign friends all over the world in penpal site
so i send them e-mails
but my writing skill is beginer
i want to talk about many things that are music,books,food and so on
how can i make writing excelletly
it is difficult thing
by the way
good night~~!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
It’s good to know that you are making friends with other people, especially foreigners. This activity will not only entertain you but it will also help you improve your writing skills. I think you should practice writing using correct punctuations and apply the rules of capitalization. You can search that on the internet. Also, try first to write in simple sentences. J Have fun writing! Goodnight!
-Teacher Kristel-
good evening tutor >> Good evening tutor!today i want to sleep early but have to do exercise
>> Today I want to sleep early but I have to exercise first.i think i seem to get a bit fat!!
>> I think I’m getting a bit fat!recently i made foreign friends all over the world in penpal site
>> Recently, I made foreign friends from all over the world on a pen pal site.so i send them e-mails but my writing skill is beginer
>> I sent them e-mails but my writing skill is for a beginner.i want to talk about many things that are music,books,food and so on >> I want to talk about many things that related to music, books, food and so on.how can i make writing excelletly>> How can I write excellently?it is difficult thing>> It is a difficult thing.
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