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I can see that you really did great in your composition today. I just have few reminders. I want you to always check your spellings and also the way you use the articles in your sentences. Also learn how to use punctuation marks when you write a sentence dear. Anyway, good job dear. Take care always.
T. Kristel
This my OPIC writing please corret that
>>This is my OPIC writing composition; please do
correct it for me.
I want to travel France with my family
>>I want to travel to France with my family.
My friend told me travel story in France
>>My friend told me a story when she travelled to
France.
She said that there were many beautiful
scenery, good Frech food
>>She
said that there were many beautiful scenery and also delicious French dishes.
Theirs own unique culthure so i am more
interested in France
Than before
>>They
have a very unique culture that뭩 the reason why I am so interested to France
more that before.
Specally i want to visit Paris and see
Eiffel Tower for myself
>>I
also want to visit Paris and see the Eiffel Tower especially for myself.
I always carry camera that take wonderful
scenery and people
>>I
always carry camera뭩 that would take wonderful scenery and also people.
And pack essential supplies that are
toiltries, guied book and
Pajamas
>>I also pack essential supplies like toiletries, guided book and of course my pajamas.
i like to travel light
>>Correct.
>>I like to travel light.
So just pack a small suitcase
>>So I normally just pack small suitcases.
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