Hello

Hello Soo!!!

Again it is a pleasure to read your articles.

For today, I totally agree with you when you said that their hobby is studying because I can see it in you.

You really have to work hard if you want to get something and I am very proud of your perseverance and diligence.

I think you should not think of learning English as a requirement for a good job but also an improvement of your skills.

You are starting to learn how to write in English and that is a good start.

You can then move on to reading but you should start small.

Start reading magazines about things that interest you so that you will not feel burdened reading it.

Anyways, below are my corrections for you to see.

Have a nice day ahead!!!

Teacher Roxy

xoxoxo

Today, I will talk about english skill that companies ask to job applicant in Korea.

These day, One of the most interested things I think is getting a job.

>> Lately, I am more focused in getting a job.

It not means getting the part time job, I just want to get a real job. 

>> I don\'t want to get just a pert time job but I want a permanent or full time job.

In the South Korea. We have to get a score set of english test.  

>> In south Korea, we have to get a high score in the English test.

You must know TOEIC.

>> You must be familiar with TOEIC?

Actually, I have never studied english about TOEIC although I have studied for about 8 years in the elementary, middle, and high school.  So I am so worried about the test. 

>> Actually, I have never heard about TOEIC but I have studied English for about 8 years when I was in elementary, middle and high school so I am really worried about the test.

I seriously love to study speaking english. But I really don’t like to study grammar and reading the something in english.

>> I love learning how to speak in English but I don\'t like to study grammar and reading something in English.

But companies want to test score that they can see and estimate. 

>> But the companies really want to see a score that shows our skills.

So many job applicant in korea are too busy to enjoy their leisure.  It is due to unemployment problem.

>> A lot of applicants in Korea are very busy to enjoy their leisure due to unemployment. 

I think their hobby look like studying.

>> I think their hobby is studying. 

I guess qualification that companies require is on the equalization of an upward direction.

>> I guess the qualifications companies are looking for will lead for a better development.

So we have to study hard and get a good score to be a member in society.

>> So, we have to study hard and get a good score to earn our place in the society.