Hello

Hello Soo!!!

It is nice to read another article from you.

The story you told me is really tragic. 

The professor should be penalized and sent to prison and should not be allowed to teach anymore.

Professors should be good examples for their students.

Anyways, I hope that this story will not make you very very worried but only cautious.

Below are the corrections for you to review.

Have a nice day!!!

Teacher Roxy

xoxoxo

I will talk about a awful story in university in Korea.

>> I read an article about a horrible story in Gyeonggi province university which a famous university in Korea.

The professor in the university forced student to eat human waste. I can\'t understand that meaning.

>> One of the professors forced the students to eat human waste.(you can remove the next sentence)

Also he tied the student\'s hands and feet and coverd his face with plastic bac.

>> He also tied the student\'s hands and feet and covered their faces with plastic bag.

In addition, the student was on detention.

The student was too scared so he couldn\'t ask to police.

>> The student at that time was in detention and he was really scared to go to the police for help.

Actually, In korea, we have a little stric convention like the relationship between subordinates and superiors. 

>> In Korea, we have a strict policy about the relationship between subordinates and superiors.

I think It has good something, But It have to be less stric. Because if we won\'t, Somebody make bad use like this incident. 

>> I think it is good in some ways but it have to be less strict because some people will use it for their advantage.

I was sorry about that. And I am worried about that becuase I will be in the sociedy. I will have a boss, and I have to make a relation with them.

>> I am really sorry for what happened to the student and worried at the same time because I will be a part of a company and I have a boss to work with and I need to work well with them. 

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