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In Korea, There are so many people prefered daughters over sons in tough economic times , a study has revealed The article said, parents think that daughters will produce some offspring, but many sons won't have zero offspring. These days, many people think if your daughters married, you get aonther sons. However if your sons marred, you can't get another daughters. I think that shows that wonmen power is stronger than in the past. Especially in my country, there weren't any position for women as economic or social final decision in the past. But these days, woman have a lot of final decision. Daughters work and do housework as well these days. So they can have a power in the house. Therefore the daughers can give their parents a lot of interest and love of her own. And It is wired for their husband to interupt wife's interest for her family. On the other hand, sons always work too hard so they don't have any time to be interested in their parents. As a result,I agree that the study

Hello Soo!!!

I hope you are having a dazzling day!!!

You are really getting the hang of expressing yourself more.

I think that equal treatment should be given for the sons and daughters of the world.

There are also daughters who forget about their parents because of their busy schedule and there are sons who do their best to still keep in touch with their parents.

In my opinion it is a case to case basis and it depends upon how parents raise their kids.

Anyways Soo, that is your opinion and your are entitled to have one.

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Teacher Roxy

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In Korea, There are so many people prefered daughters over sons in tough economic times , a study has revealed

>> A study has revealed that in Korea, a lot of people prefer having daughters over sons because of the tough economic status.

The article said, parents think that daughters will produce some offspring, but many sons won\'t have zero offspring.
>> The article said that parents think that daughters will produce offspring while sons won\'t. 

These days, many people think if your daughters married, you get aonther sons.

>> These days, people think that if your daughter gets married you will have a son.

However if your sons marred, you can\'t get another daughters.

>> However if it is the son who gets married you can\'t have a daughter.

I think that shows that wonmen power is stronger than in the past. 

>> I think this only shows that woman power is stronger that before.

Especially in my country, there weren\'t any position for women as economic or social final decision in the past.  But these days, woman have a lot of final decision.  

>> For example in my country, before the were no positions for women but now women make the final decision.

 Daughters work and do housework as well these days.  So they can have a power in the house.

>> Daughters can work and do household work at the same time. 

Therefore the daughers can give their parents a lot of interest and love of her own.  And It is wired for their husband to interupt wife\'s interest for her family.

>> Daughters can give their parents a lot of love and care so husbands should not meddle with their wives interest in taking care of her family.

On the other hand, sons always work too hard so they don\'t have any time to be interested in their parents. 

>> On the other hand, sons are to busy working hard so they don\'t have time to be with their parents. 

 As a result,I agree that the study

>> I therefore agree with what the study says.