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Hello [이름]!
I had a great time reading your composition. Your sentences were very good. However, please check on your spelling as well as correct spacing. Thank you! Have a great day ahead!
Teacher Chrsitine (^_^)v
Q1: Do you have any ambitions for the future?
Yes, I do.
Correct
I have ambitions for my future.
Correct
I want to be a cabin crew as a best.
>> I want to work as the best crew in a cabin.
Even if I become a flight attendant I'll do my best at work.
>> Even if I become a flight attendant, I'll do my best at work.
Also I'm going to travel over the world as a best cabin crew.
Correct
So I eager to be a cabin crew for my ambitions.
>> I am so eager of becoming a cabin crew.
Q2: Please tell me what you think a job is.
No answer.
Q3: Do you have any special skills?
Yes, I do.
Correct
I can do yoga very well.
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I have dancing and yoga such as strength for 5years eventhough I don't have license I can teach very well.
>> I am teaching dancing and yoga for five years. Even though I don't have license, I can teach very well.
When I have been Philippines I taught yoga to stedents.
>> I taught yoga when I’ve been to Philippines.
At that time I was famous yoga teacher in my school.
>> At that time, I was famous as yoga teacher in my school.
For me yoga is not only saecial skill and also favorit hobby.
>> For me yoga is not only special skill but also a hobby.
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