Hello~

2011-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there :) It's very nice weather today~ I was cold yesterday :( Umm I write composition for a long time. I was busy in the meantime. By the way, I don't know why I was busy.kk So I decided to plan ahead. I was very satisfied with today's class. It may be because you led to our class clamly. That's why I write this composition. Thank you for teaching well and getting up me. hehe As you know, I have a last test in midterm examination. That name is relationship between employee-employer. I don't know why I choose that subject. But I think listening that classes will give me some value... You may be busy, but I wish you all the best today. See you tomorrow morning :D

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Thank you so much for your composition. I was glad that you were satisfied with our class today. I enjoyed our class too. I will see you again tomorrow. Take care! _T. Kelly   It's very nice weather today~ >> The weather is nice today.I was cold yesterday :( >> It was cold yesterday.Umm I write composition for a long time. >> It’s been a Iong time since I wrote my last composition.I was busy in the meantime. >> I was busy for the meantime.By the way, I don't know why I was busy.kk >> Correct.So I decided to plan ahead. >> Correct.I was very satisfied with today's class. >> Correct.It may be because you led to our class clamly. >> It maybe because you led our class calmly.That's why I write this composition. >> Correct. >> That’s why I’m writing this composition now.Thank you for teaching well and getting up me. Hehe >> Thank you for teaching well and waking me up.As you know, I have a last test in midterm examination. >> As you know, I just finished my midterm examination.That name is relationship between employee-employer. >> The topic was about employer- employee relationship.I don't know why I choose that subject. >> I don’t know why I chose that subject.But I think listening that classes will give me some value... >> I think that I can acquire some values if I will listen to the lecture during class.You may be busy, but I wish you all the best today. >> Correct.See you tomorrow morning :D >> Correct.

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