Hello~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there :)
It's very nice weather today~
I was cold yesterday :(
Umm I write composition for a long time.
I was busy in the meantime.
By the way, I don't know why I was busy.kk
So I decided to plan ahead.
I was very satisfied with today's class.
It may be because you led to our class clamly.
That's why I write this composition.
Thank you for teaching well and getting up me. hehe
As you know, I have a last test in midterm examination.
That name is relationship between employee-employer.
I don't know why I choose that subject.
But I think listening that classes will give me some value...
You may be busy, but I wish you all the best today.
See you tomorrow morning :D
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! Thank you so much for your composition. I was glad that you were satisfied with our class today. I enjoyed our class too. I will see you again tomorrow. Take care!
_T. Kelly
It's very nice weather today~
>> The weather is nice today.I was cold yesterday :(
>> It was cold yesterday.Umm I write composition for a long time.
>> It’s been a Iong time since I wrote my last composition.I was busy in the meantime.
>> I was busy for the meantime.By the way, I don't know why I was busy.kk
>> Correct.So I decided to plan ahead.
>> Correct.I was very satisfied with today's class.
>> Correct.It may be because you led to our class clamly.
>> It maybe because you led our class calmly.That's why I write this composition.
>> Correct.
>> That’s why I’m writing this composition now.Thank you for teaching well and getting up me. Hehe
>> Thank you for teaching well and waking me up.As you know, I have a last test in midterm examination.
>> As you know, I just finished my midterm examination.That name is relationship between employee-employer.
>> The topic was about employer- employee relationship.I don't know why I choose that subject.
>> I don’t know why I chose that subject.But I think listening that classes will give me some value...
>> I think that I can acquire some values if I will listen to the lecture during class.You may be busy, but I wish you all the best today.
>> Correct.See you tomorrow morning :D
>> Correct.
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