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2011-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi Good morning :) I appreciate that you woke me up Anyway, Here is my composition about food I can make well. Actually, I love to eat a steak but I can't make it because it is difficult to make a steak. I make well korean stew that is tuna and kimchi stew. I can explain to you how to make that. First, stir and fry kimchi in oil. Then pour water into the pot and put a can of tuna and seasoning and some vegetable like onion, green onion, chili. Last, heating that stew. It is simple to cook the stew. The food is a bit spicy but very delicious. How is the weather over there? It is raining today in here. I heard that it is yellow sand and radio rain. Anyway, take care and enjoy today :)

강사 첨삭

Hello there beautiful girl.:) I appreciate your effort in making a composition. It’s so nice to know that you can cook. That’s a skill that you further develop. Anyway, enjoy your day. _T. Kelly Hi Good morning :) >> Correct.I appreciate that you woke me up >> CorrectAnyway, Here is my composition about food I can make well. >> Anyway, here is my composition about the food that I can make well.Actually, I love to eat a steak but I can't make it because it is difficult to make a steak. >> Actually, I love to eat steak but I can’t make it because the process is difficult.I make well korean stew that is tuna and kimchi stew. >> I make Korean stew well like tuna and kimchi stew.I can explain to you how to make that. >> I can tell you how to make them. First, stir and fry kimchi in oil. >> Correct.Then pour water into the pot and put a can of tuna and seasoning and some vegetable like onion, green onion, chili. >>Then pour water into the pot. Add the ingredients like tuna, onion and green onion and some seasoning and chili.Last, heating that stew. >> Lastly, heat the stew.It is simple to cook the stew. >> It is simple to cook stew.The food is a bit spicy but very delicious. >> Correct.How is the weather over there? >> Correct.It is raining today in here. >> It is raining here today.I heard that it is yellow sand and radio rain. >> I heard in the radio that there is a yellow sand now that it is raining.Anyway, take care and enjoy today :) >> Correct.

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