Hello~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Good morning :)
I appreciate that you woke me up
Anyway, Here is my composition about food I can make well.
Actually, I love to eat a steak but I can't make it because it is difficult to make a steak.
I make well korean stew that is tuna and kimchi stew.
I can explain to you how to make that.
First, stir and fry kimchi in oil.
Then pour water into the pot and put a can of tuna and seasoning and some vegetable like onion, green onion, chili.
Last, heating that stew.
It is simple to cook the stew.
The food is a bit spicy but very delicious.
How is the weather over there?
It is raining today in here.
I heard that it is yellow sand and radio rain.
Anyway, take care and enjoy today :)
강사 첨삭
Hello there beautiful girl.:) I appreciate your effort in making a composition. It’s so nice to know that you can cook. That’s a skill that you further develop. Anyway, enjoy your day. _T. Kelly
Hi Good morning :)
>> Correct.I appreciate that you woke me up
>> CorrectAnyway, Here is my composition about food I can make well.
>> Anyway, here is my composition about the food that I can make well.Actually, I love to eat a steak but I can't make it because it is difficult to make a steak.
>> Actually, I love to eat steak but I can’t make it because the process is difficult.I make well korean stew that is tuna and kimchi stew.
>> I make Korean stew well like tuna and kimchi stew.I can explain to you how to make that.
>> I can tell you how to make them. First, stir and fry kimchi in oil.
>> Correct.Then pour water into the pot and put a can of tuna and seasoning and some vegetable like onion,
green onion, chili.
>>Then pour water into the pot. Add the ingredients like tuna, onion and green onion and some seasoning and chili.Last, heating that stew.
>> Lastly, heat the stew.It is simple to cook the stew.
>> It is simple to cook stew.The food is a bit spicy but very delicious.
>> Correct.How is the weather over there?
>> Correct.It is raining today in here.
>> It is raining here today.I heard that it is yellow sand and radio rain.
>> I heard in the radio that there is a yellow sand now that it is raining.Anyway, take care and enjoy today :)
>> Correct.
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