hello!!

2011-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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i love you girl. and i really want to get your call tomorrow.. but i think i will not be able to do....:( i have one report and one presentation tomorrow. and i will do that all night.............. please forgive me... i always dream my future that i'm very happy. good night pretty!

강사 첨삭

Beautiful [이름]! You are always so sweet. So it's okay. Just finish what you have to do and we'll talk later. T. Joanna   i love you girl.>>CORRECTand i really want to get your call tomorrow.. >>CORRECTbut i think i will not be able to do....:(>>But I think I will not be able to. >>But I think I will not be able to do that.i have one report and one presentation tomorrow. >>CORRECTand i will do that all night..............>>CORRECTplease forgive me...>>CORRECTi always dream my future that i'm very happy.>>I always dream about that I'm very happy in the future.good night pretty! >>CORRECT And then, teacher called my name. >>And then, the teacher called my name . Whenever I take a test, they always cheat mine. >>CORRECT

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