hello
학생이 쓴 원문
tomorrow is Children's Day in korea
when i was a little girl , my parents gave me many gifts
i liked beautiful dolls that were Barbie doll and rabbit or bear doll
anyway the day is hoilday so lots of people are really happy
but i am so-so beause i quited my job recently due to study
everyday i am studying hard about enterance exam of graduate school
and English so a bit tried
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sending this composition today. Good luck on your exams!
I'll catch up with you more later in class! See yah.
-Dominic-
tomorrow is Children's Day in korea>>Tomorrow is Children's day in Korea. when i was a little girl , my parents gave me many gifts
>>When I was a little girl my parents gave me many gifts. i liked beautiful dolls that were Barbie doll and rabbit or bear doll>>I liked beautiful dolls like Barbie and stuffed animals like rabbit and bear. anyway the day is hoilday so lots of people are really happy
>>Anyway that day is a holiday so a lot people are really happy. but i am so-so beause i quited my job recently due to study >>But just okay with it because I quite my job recently for my studies. everyday i am studying hard about enterance exam of graduate school and English so a bit tried
>>Everyday I am studying hard for the entrance exam in graduate school and English, so now I'm a bit tired.
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