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2011-05-06 · 첨삭 강사 Dominic

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tomorrow is Children's Day in korea when i was a little girl , my parents gave me many gifts i liked beautiful dolls that were Barbie doll and rabbit or bear doll anyway the day is hoilday so lots of people are really happy but i am so-so beause i quited my job recently due to study everyday i am studying hard about enterance exam of graduate school and English so a bit tried

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for sending this composition today. Good luck on your exams! I'll catch up with you more later in class! See yah. -Dominic- tomorrow is Children's Day in korea>>Tomorrow is Children's day in Korea. when i was a little girl , my parents gave me many gifts >>When I was a little girl my parents gave me many gifts. i liked beautiful dolls that were Barbie doll and rabbit or bear doll>>I liked beautiful dolls like Barbie and stuffed animals like rabbit and bear. anyway the day is hoilday so lots of people are really happy >>Anyway that day is a holiday so a lot people are really happy. but i am so-so beause i quited my job recently due to study >>But just okay with it because I quite my job recently for my studies. everyday i am studying hard about enterance exam of graduate school and English so a bit tried >>Everyday I am studying hard for the entrance exam in graduate school and English, so now I'm a bit tired.

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