hello
학생이 쓴 원문
it is cloudy and raining today
i don't like this weather
it was a mild day in korea last weekends
so when i met my friends in a long time
we went to Chinese restaurant and cafe
it was really happy time
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I'm glad to hear that the you enjoyed the weekends. It's a good time to catch up with friends that you haven't seen in a long time. Too bad the weather today was a buzzkill!
Anyway, take care and I'll see you later!
-T. Dominic-
it is cloudy and raining today >>Correct [Just capitalize It]
>>It's cloudy and rainy today
i don't like this weather>>I don't like this weather.
>>I dislike this kind of weather.
it was a mild day in korea last weekends>>We had a good weather here in Korea last weekend.
so when i met my friends in a long time we went to Chinese restaurant and cafe >>So when I met up with my friends we went to a Chinese Caf?and Restaurant.
it was really happy time
>>It was really a happy time.
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