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2011-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

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it is cloudy and raining today i don't like this weather it was a mild day in korea last weekends so when i met my friends in a long time we went to Chinese restaurant and cafe it was really happy time

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! I'm glad to hear that the you enjoyed the weekends. It's a good time to catch up with friends that you haven't seen in  a long time. Too bad the weather today was a buzzkill! Anyway, take care and I'll see you later! -T. Dominic-   it is cloudy and raining today >>Correct [Just capitalize It] >>It's cloudy and rainy today i don't like this weather>>I don't like this weather. >>I dislike this kind of weather. it was a mild day in korea last weekends>>We had a good weather here in Korea last weekend. so when i met my friends in a long time we went to Chinese restaurant and cafe >>So when I met up with my friends we went to a Chinese Caf?and Restaurant. it was really happy time >>It was really a happy time.

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