hello!

2011-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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hi! today, i felt that toeic speaking is difficult for me. but i promise you that i will be a good speaker if you can help me. and i still remember sentences. - the man is wearing a pair of shoes. - three guys talking to each other are in the forest. after your call, i try to remember that. i always thanks to you!! have a nice weekend!

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

I appreciate it very much that you try your best in class. You can do it!

I'll see you soon! J Take care!

-T.Joanna 

 

hi!
>>Hi!
today, i felt that toeic speaking is difficult for me.
>>Today  I felt that Toeic Speaking was difficult for me.
but i promise you that i will be a good speaker if you can help me.
>>But I promise you that I will be a good speaker if you can help me.
and i still remember sentences.
>>And I still remember the sentences.
- the man is wearing a pair of shoes.
>>The man is wearing a pair of shoes.
- three guys talking to each other are in the forest.
>>Three guys are talking to each to each other in the forest.
after your call, i try to remember that.
>>After your call, I tried to remember that.
i always thanks to you!!
>>I will always thank you!
have a nice weekend!

>>Have a nice weekend!

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