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I had only one book and unluckily it was boring
7. We were dreadfully late. It was very embarrassing.
8. The results were very disappointed
9. Josh looked even more excited than he felt.
10. We invited them to join us but they weren't really interesting.
Hmm yesterday how can we do that?
maybe 3 times cuts the kine on talking.
i'm so said i didn't listen beatyful voice from you continously.
if i will have time to call the manager. i fix it exactly.
anyway i'm happy seeing my baby after finished today job.
it's my plan go over there to see my baby,
what is your plan that week? tell me more
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Hi Big Jone!
Have a great day.^^
Your homework is okay. Please study and understand the corrections below.
I don\'t really know what happened in our class yesterday. I hope that it won\'t happen again in our class today.
Maybe we can talk about your weekend plans in class. I think that you can tell a lot.
I don\'t really have many plans but I am hoping for enough rest this weekend.
See you in class!
Teacher Daisy^^
I had only one book and unluckily it was boring
>>> Correct sentence but please don\'t forget to put a period at the end of your sentence.
OR >>> 6. I had only one book and unluckily it was boring.
7. We were dreadfully late. It was very embarrassing.
>>> Correct!
8. The results were very disappointed
>>> The results were very disappointing.
9. Josh looked even more excited than he felt.
>>> Correct!
10. We invited them to join us but they weren\'t really interesting.
>>> We invited them to join us but they weren\'t really interested.
Hmm yesterday how can we do that?
>>> What can we do about our class yesterday?
maybe 3 times cuts the kine on talking.
>>> I think that we had 3 cuts while we were talking.
i\'m so said i didn\'t listen beatyful voice from you continously.
>>> I\'m so sad I didn\'t listen to your beautiful voice continuously.
if i will have time to call the manager. i fix it exactly.
>>> If I will have time to call the manager, I will ask them to check it immediately.
anyway i\'m happy seeing my baby after finished today job.
>>> Anyway, I\'m happy to see my baby after finishing my work today.
it\'s my plan go over there to see my baby,
>>> It\'s really my plan to visit my baby.
what is your plan that week? tell me more
>>> What is your plan this weekend? You can tell me about it in class.
Have a great day.^^
Your homework is okay. Please study and understand the corrections below.
I don\'t really know what happened in our class yesterday. I hope that it won\'t happen again in our class today.
Maybe we can talk about your weekend plans in class. I think that you can tell a lot.
I don\'t really have many plans but I am hoping for enough rest this weekend.
See you in class!
Teacher Daisy^^
I had only one book and unluckily it was boring
>>> Correct sentence but please don\'t forget to put a period at the end of your sentence.
OR >>> 6. I had only one book and unluckily it was boring.
7. We were dreadfully late. It was very embarrassing.
>>> Correct!
8. The results were very disappointed
>>> The results were very disappointing.
9. Josh looked even more excited than he felt.
>>> Correct!
10. We invited them to join us but they weren\'t really interesting.
>>> We invited them to join us but they weren\'t really interested.
Hmm yesterday how can we do that?
>>> What can we do about our class yesterday?
maybe 3 times cuts the kine on talking.
>>> I think that we had 3 cuts while we were talking.
i\'m so said i didn\'t listen beatyful voice from you continously.
>>> I\'m so sad I didn\'t listen to your beautiful voice continuously.
if i will have time to call the manager. i fix it exactly.
>>> If I will have time to call the manager, I will ask them to check it immediately.
anyway i\'m happy seeing my baby after finished today job.
>>> Anyway, I\'m happy to see my baby after finishing my work today.
it\'s my plan go over there to see my baby,
>>> It\'s really my plan to visit my baby.
what is your plan that week? tell me more
>>> What is your plan this weekend? You can tell me about it in class.
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