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When I told my boss that I needed two weeks off to visit my sick grandmother in Mexico, she wasn’t very sympathetic. Probably because she knows I don’t have any relatives in Mexico.
Jenna doesn’t like her floppy hair, but she’s too lazy to straighten it.
“Jas, that skirt is horrendous! No one will ever find you remotely attractive if you go outside wearing that!” counseled Jas’s best friend, Mandy.
show me what you have got. <== i saw the TV that name is RAP Start battle.
after we got talked each other i was boring to do what shall i have.
some kind of gloomy in my mind. how about you?
sometime are you feel goomy more other people thought?
this place os so cold and i don't know who is here i know?
so i image i feel better i can take alchol. yes i can
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Hi Big Jone!
Good day to you. Thanks for doing your homework but I think that it is incomplete. You only did 3 items.
Please see the corrections below.
In writing sentences, please don\'t forget to start your sentence in a capital letter. Capital letters are important in a sentence.
See you in class!
Teacher Daisy^^
When I told my boss that I needed two weeks off to visit my sick grandmother in Mexico, she wasn’t very sympathetic. Probably because she knows I don’t have any relatives in Mexico.
>>> Correct Answer!
Jenna doesn’t like her floppy hair, but she’s too lazy to straighten it.
>>> Jenna doesn’t like her curly hair, but she’s too lazy to straighten it.
“Jas, that skirt is horrendous! No one will ever find you remotely attractive if you go outside wearing that!” counseled Jas’s best friend, Mandy.
>>> Correct Answer!
show me what you have got. <== i saw the TV that name is RAP Start battle.
>>> Show Me What You\'ve Got <== I saw this on TV and it is a Rap Star Battle.
after we got talked each other i was boring to do what shall i have.
>>> After we talked to each other, I was bored and I don\'t know what to do.
some kind of gloomy in my mind. how about you?
>>> You mean: I felt a little sad.
sometime are you feel goomy more other people thought?
>>> Do you also feel sad more than what other people thought?
this place os so cold and i don\'t know who is here i know?
>>> This place is so cold and I don\'t know if someone I know is in this place too.
so i image i feel better i can take alchol. yes i can
>>> So I think that I will feel better If I will drink an alcohol. Yes, I think I do.
Good day to you. Thanks for doing your homework but I think that it is incomplete. You only did 3 items.
Please see the corrections below.
In writing sentences, please don\'t forget to start your sentence in a capital letter. Capital letters are important in a sentence.
See you in class!
Teacher Daisy^^
When I told my boss that I needed two weeks off to visit my sick grandmother in Mexico, she wasn’t very sympathetic. Probably because she knows I don’t have any relatives in Mexico.
>>> Correct Answer!
Jenna doesn’t like her floppy hair, but she’s too lazy to straighten it.
>>> Jenna doesn’t like her curly hair, but she’s too lazy to straighten it.
“Jas, that skirt is horrendous! No one will ever find you remotely attractive if you go outside wearing that!” counseled Jas’s best friend, Mandy.
>>> Correct Answer!
show me what you have got. <== i saw the TV that name is RAP Start battle.
>>> Show Me What You\'ve Got <== I saw this on TV and it is a Rap Star Battle.
after we got talked each other i was boring to do what shall i have.
>>> After we talked to each other, I was bored and I don\'t know what to do.
some kind of gloomy in my mind. how about you?
>>> You mean: I felt a little sad.
sometime are you feel goomy more other people thought?
>>> Do you also feel sad more than what other people thought?
this place os so cold and i don\'t know who is here i know?
>>> This place is so cold and I don\'t know if someone I know is in this place too.
so i image i feel better i can take alchol. yes i can
>>> So I think that I will feel better If I will drink an alcohol. Yes, I think I do.
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