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2011-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

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yesterday i did exercise with my friend at the park because i started to go on a diet i think i gain weigth so have to get back

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Hi Ms. [이름]! Now I know why you couldn't answer my call. Also don't forget to include fruits, vegetables and protein for a healthy weightloss. Good luck on your diet! See yah! J -T. Dominic -   yesterday i did exercise with my friend at the park>>Yesterday, I exercised with my friend at the park.because i started to go on a diet >>Because I started to go on a diet. i think i gain weigth so have to get back >>I think I gained weight so I have to get back in shape.

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