hello
학생이 쓴 원문
today it is a mild day
so i am really happy
before i start class, i will meet my friend in a short time
because i will give her the book that i borrowed
and i met my boyfriend last Sunday
we went to cafe near my house
and promised plan that is meeting on Tuseday
anyway
i have to go outside
see you soon
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
It's good to hear that you had a fair weather today. I think that think that that kind of weather would be in favor for you to do a lot of activities for today. Keep safe! See you later!
-T.Dominic
P.S.Please do not forget to capitalize the beginning of your sentences and your proper nouns,ayte?
today it is a mild day>>We had a mild weather today.so i am really happy>>So I am really happy.before i start class, i will meet my friend in a short time>>Before I start the class I will meet my friend for a while. because i will give her the book that i borrowed>>CORRECT [please capitalize I and the words that start your sentences]
>>Because I will give her back the book that I borrowed. and i met my boyfriend last Sunday >>Also, I met my boyfriend last Sunday. [please avoid starting the sentence with Because and And]we went to cafe near my house >>We to a caf?near my house. and promised plan that is meeting on Tuseday>>And I made a plan to meet him on Tuesday. [is this what you mean?]anyway i have to go outside >>Anyway I have to go outside.
>>Anyway I have to go now. see you soon
>>See you soon.
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