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2011-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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today, i was busy. i had a appoinment with my professor to eat lunch. before meeting with professor, i went to student support center to submit some files . on eating lunch, my professor suggested that i participate in the university student contest. and i recievee his suggestion. the whether was bad but my feeling was good because i can find another thing that i can do it. good night petty!

강사 첨삭

Good morning beautiful, [이름]! Go for it! If you're happy and you know you can do it then I would be glad to be looking forward for another achievement of a young leader in you. Aim higher and hit the bull's eye! Let's talk later! Loving you always, Teacher Joanna   today, i was busy. >>I was busy today.i had a appoinment with my professor to eat lunch. before meeting with professor, i went to student support center to submit some files . on eating lunch, my professor suggested that i participate in the university student contest.and i recievee his suggestion.>> I went to the Student Support Center to submit some files then had a lunch meeting with my professor after. During the lunch meeting, my professor suggested me to participate in the university student contest and I accepted his suggestion.the whether was bad but my feeling was good because i can find another thing that i can do it.>>The weather is bad but my feeling is good because I found another thing to be busy at.Good night, pretty!  

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