hello!

2011-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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i think today is lucky day. on your call, i was happy because of your compliment. And i presented on my class. professor talked to me that i did a good job. i'm very happy now. but just one thing, actually, i like someone who is very smart. i like him but i don't know what he thinks. i hate this feeling but i like him. good night pretty!

강사 첨삭

Hello there, beautiful! A positive attitude is an important key to the success of your goals and dreams. You can overcome any obstacle when you have the right attitude. One simple word for it... happiness! You can achieve anything you want when you have the right attitude every day of your life! Enjoy a happy, positive attitude and bring great success into your life.   A positive attitude... it changes everything.   Wishing you all the luck always, T. Joanna   i think today is lucky day. >>I think today is  a lucky day. on your call, i was happy because of your compliment. >>I was happy during our lesson time because of your compliment. And i presented on my class. >>I did a presentation in class after your call. professor talked to me that i did a good job. >>My professor talked to me and said that I did a good job. I'm very happy now. >>correct! but just one thing, actually, >>But there is this one thing that troubles me these days. I like someone who is very smart. >>correct! I like him but i don't know what he thinks. >>correct >>I like him but I don't what he is thinking. >>I like him but I don't know what he has in mind. I hate this feeling but I like him. >>correct! Good night, pretty! >>correct!

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