hello
학생이 쓴 원문
good afternoon teacher!
I have good holiday and weekend. how was your weekend?
I went to the cinema last evening. it started at 11:50pm and ended at01:20am. I am sooooo tired becasue i only slept 4hours.
after i finish my work i am going to the gym and then have to go to chiness academy.
I have presentation tomorrow morning. i want to make something new presentation however it is alwasy same contents so it is kind of boaring.
I will try to write some sentens here to practice writing.
Thank you so much for your good teaching and talk to you soon.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sending this on time. It\'s good that you were able to spend your holiday well. Good luck on your presentation tomorrow and I hope that the corrections that I made will help you a lot.
~~Teacher Cristine
good afternoon teacher!
>> Good afternoon teacher!
I have good holiday and weekend. how was your weekend?
>> I had a good holiday and weekend. How about you? How was your weekend?
I went to the cinema last evening.
>> correct
it started at 11:50pm and ended at01:20am.
>> It started at 11:50 pm and ended at 1:20 am.
I am sooooo tired becasue i only slept 4hours.
>> I am so tired because I only slept for four hours.
after i finish my work i am going to the gym and then have to go to chiness academy.
>> After finishing my work, I will go first to the gym then to the Chinese Academy.
I have presentation tomorrow morning.
>> I have a presentation tomorrow morning.
i want to make something new presentation however it is alwasy same contents so it is kind of boaring.
>> I want to try making something new on my presentation in spite of the fact that it has the same contents that are really boring.
I will try to write some sentens here to practice writing.
>> I will try to write some sentences to paractice my writing.
Thank you so much for your good teaching and talk to you soon.
>> Thank you so much for teaching me well. Hopefully, I can talk with you soon.
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