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2016-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 cristine

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good afternoon teacher! I have good holiday and weekend. how was your weekend? I went to the cinema last evening. it started at 11:50pm and ended at01:20am. I am sooooo tired becasue i only slept 4hours. after i finish my work i am going to the gym and then have to go to chiness academy. I have presentation tomorrow morning. i want to make something new presentation however it is alwasy same contents so it is kind of boaring. I will try to write some sentens here to practice writing. Thank you so much for your good teaching and talk to you soon.

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Hi [이름]!   Thank you for sending this on time. It\'s good that you were able to spend your holiday well. Good luck on your presentation tomorrow and I hope  that the corrections that I made will help you a lot.   ~~Teacher Cristine   good afternoon teacher! >> Good afternoon teacher! I have good holiday and weekend. how was your weekend? >> I had a good holiday and weekend. How about you? How was your weekend? I went to the cinema last evening. >> correct it started at 11:50pm and ended at01:20am. >> It started at 11:50 pm and ended at 1:20 am. I am sooooo tired becasue i only slept 4hours. >>  I am so tired because I only slept for four hours. after i finish my work i am going to the gym and then have to go to chiness academy. >> After finishing my work, I will go first to the gym then to the Chinese Academy. I have presentation tomorrow morning. >> I have a presentation tomorrow morning. i want to make something new presentation however it is alwasy same contents so it is kind of boaring. >> I want to try making something new on my presentation in spite of the fact that it has the same contents that are really boring. I will try to write some sentens here to practice writing. >> I will try to write some sentences to paractice my writing. Thank you so much for your good teaching and talk to you soon. >> Thank you so much for teaching me well. Hopefully, I can talk with you soon.

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