hello!!

2011-06-06 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

학생이 쓴 원문

yesterday, i went to travel to jeju. it sounds strange,isn't it? haha i had to get some information about tourism info system of jeju because of my contest. and i went around the jeju with my classmate. he teached me good places which i can enjoy with friend or boyfriend. he told that he has been to borakai(?) with his girl friend last year. and he felt that there was heaven. i really envy him. and i will go to borakai!!!!!!!

강사 첨삭

Aside from travel arrangements, another usual concern when going to Boracay is where to stay during the entire vacation. You might want to stay for a few days in the island without the hassle of paying for too expensive accommodations. Because there are many foreign tourists in Boracay, big-time investors have strategically put up resort hotels with rates that are without doubt affordable to international guests. For locals like you however, finding cheap accommodations might become the most pressing dilemma of your trip. One of the best ways to get cheap accommodations in Boracay is to take advantage of off-peak rates. Try to avoid booking in resorts during the summer season or the holidays because these are times when prices usually soar. The smartest way to go about it is to plan ahead of time and set aside a specific date for your Boracay vacation. When you make reservations, inquire about your preferred resort's off-peak rates. Better yet, visit their website to get their price list. It would also be a good idea to compare the rates with other resorts' to see which one would suit you best at a price you can afford. I'm looking forward to your Boracay vacation this year! I miss you [이름]! It's me, T. Joanna yesterday, i went to travel to jeju. >>Yesterday, I went traveling to Jeju.It sounds strange,isn't it?>>(capitalize First letter of the first word in a sentence)haha>>JI had to get some information about tourism info system of jeju because of my contest. >>correctand i went around the jeju with my classmate. >>After gathering some information on tourism, my classmate and I went strolling around the island.he teached me good places which i can enjoy with friend or boyfriend. >>He showed me good places where I can enjoy with my friend/s or boyfriend.he told that he has been to borakai(?) with his girl friend last year. >>He told me that he had been to Boracay with his girlfriend last year.and he felt that there was heaven. >> And he said he felt heaven when he got there.i really envy him. and i will go to borakai!!!!!!! >>I really envy him so I decided to go to Boracay someday!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·