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2016-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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My daily tasks is my food for thought everyday. And to make a good idea and novel thing are make me to think carefully.

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  Rise and shine, Kirk! You did it! You are back on track. I hope and pray that you\'d be able to complete all your homework this session. Thank you for sharing, my dear. I have provided some recommendations below to make your statements better. Please consider them.Catch you in a while. Have a good one!  -Klein- My daily tasks is my food for thought everyday.>>My daily tasks are my food for thought every day. *every day - adverb everyday - adjectiveAnd to make a good idea and novel thing are make me to think carefully. >>Also, making good ideas and novel things allow me to think carefully.

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